Your opinion on Audio

Just wanted opinions. We were hired to do a cartoon for a customer. The idea is:

These two dogs are driving in a company truck and talking. Every now and then a “Movie Trailer Voice” steps in and says something. Pretty easy concept in my opinion.

Got some flack from a couple people and wanted unbiased opinions. So - I’m asking you guys. Understand that without visuals it doesn’t make perfect sense. But thoughts on this direction?